persuasive buisness letters
I really enjoyed you as our coach last year! I am writing to you because Molly and I really want to help you coach the younger kids. It doesn't really matter what grade. We can sort of do what Kaitlin, Shelby, and Michelle did last year for our team. We also want to help with the concession stand. I don't know if you can help us with that though.
First, we would be good helpers because of our age. We will be eleven and twelve at the time. We have had experience. Our age is good because now we are more mature. We also aren't too old to help you!
Another reason is we know you really well. Well, me, I've known you for practically all my life, but I'm not sure about Molly! I'm sure you guys have for a while! Molly just told me she has known you for her practically whole life too, so that's good! You're really funny and fun to hang out with. (I'm not joking!)
Also, helping you would be good exercise. Its way better then sitting on the couch and eating potato chips all day! (Not that we would do that or anything!) We also need the fresh air. Hopefully it won't be too hot outside!
Finally, we just really want to help you! We would be good helpers because of our age, we know you really well, and its good exercise. Plus, it won't be as much work for you! Thank you for reading this letter. Just remember, you were the best coach we have ever had!
Sincerely,
5p14
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